Story Discussion

This is a forum for discussion on the story.

8 Responses to “Story Discussion”

  1. David your sentence was a bit abrupt!

  2. It was at that moment he realized that this wasn’t his house, this wasn’t his driveway, and what had happened to his shoes.—> *And for that matter, why was he naked. Maybe it wasn’t the noise that gave him chills.*

  3. What was so abrupt about it? Had to have some sort of action in there.

  4. Really Nick, did we have to involve office space in this?

  5. Hey now, that’s a good movie!

  6. Now did we really have to turn this into a love story? I figured it would be a cross between the X-Files and Taken. Well… That’s just me…

  7. Its what you make it man. Keep it coming! maybe she turns into some E.T. that just wants his cheeseburger. Maybe she stands him up and he later gets abducted while waiting at Big Boy while his soup gets cold. No one else is typing so make it what you want!

    Paul

  8. I don’t knwo what you’re talking about David. :-) Office space? Nothin’ to see here :)

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